In the journey to your freedom and awakening you took my everything
The longing of being apart from you leaves me paralyzed
I lie in bed all night in a vegetative state
Searching through my bags i found your shirt
I havent been able to part with it ever since because of your insatiable scent on it
You always did smell so good
Like rough sweet sweat with a pinch of flowery essence
I know i am probably going insane
But what am i to do with out you here
I can’t eat, read or even sleep with out you in my every thought
I’ts impossible for me to doze with out your arms around me
And when somehow i do manage
I fall deep into a world of you, our memories and the love we shared
The ache in my heart is so deep because i know you are forever gone
Distance is supposed to make the love fade
But with every second that i’m not with you
My heart grows fonder
Then the wound in my wrecked heart gets bigger
Morphing into a terrible infected gush
Why have you forsaken me my love..
chicpress 
Really great job Abi girl! You must get your talent honestly, lol! Kidding aside, I loved it!! Peace, love, blessings and XOXO ~ Mom
Thanks Mom.. :-D… I really appreciate you checking out my poems.. 🙂
Nobody loves you better than your Beloved (higher self)!…the one(s) who betray you are not worthy of such devotion as (y)ours…you will find our love…further up & further in….:-)…keep writing…I hear my song echoing in your hart of harts….who are we? Nobody knows everything about love. We are Nobody! LOL!^^~~~~~
Thank you so much! Your words are much appreciated. 🙂
Deep stuff! You can feel the pain!
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.. 🙂
Nice poem, the dark mood in the photo is perfect for this post!
thx for visiting 🙂
Thank you so much!! I appreciate it.. 🙂
Ouch, been there several times… Trying to survive it now, and it sucks… Only 5 months out since my most recent loss… Hard to miss someone that doesn’t feel the same about you anymore… Tears you up
Great Work, appreciate it
DarkJade-
Thank you, i hope you will be able to move past it.. 🙂
Love it. It reminds me of a phase I went through. Damn. And terri is your mom ? Whoa. 😀 Mum and daughter, both so freaking talented.
lol.. Terri is my Cyber Mom.. :-).. Thanks for coming over.. 🙂
Beautiful poem somehow summed upthe story of me life…
It happens…
Loved the poem .. Sad bit then truth sometimes gives hurt toooo…
thank you.. i’m sorry you had to go through so much hurt..sometimes we have to go through a lot of pain in order to have lasting happiness.. 🙂
Amen to that 🙂
I’m digging this piece..
Thank you.. 🙂
Wow girl, this is incredible…really sad for her…
Yeah it really is.. But sometimes we have to experience sadness in order to achieve greatness..thanks for coming by.. 🙂
Those last seven lines tell it all, nice poem.
Thank you so much.. 🙂
This is on of the most heart-wrenching pieces I have ever read. Very expressively composed.
Thank you so much Zumpoems.. I really appreciate your comment.. 🙂
Oh, the pain of heartbreak! Well-written.
thank you.. i believe its the worst pain that a person can feel..thanks for coming by.. 🙂
This is so well written! Super good job 🙂
Thank you.. :-)…:-D.. and thanks for stopping by
This is beautiful, although very sad! Wonderful writing! 🙂
Yeah it is very sad, i appreciate you coming by. Thank you. 🙂
Another great one!!
lovely seeing you here.. 😀
Brilliant, poem, but distance always makes the heart grow stronger!
Yeah it does, its just that people believe that if you have broken up with someone and you are apart from them( never seeing them much) it would be easy to forget about them and move on. But most of the time this is not the case..
Ah… That’s too touching and a great poem!!! The greatest of all the pain’s we ever sense in our life-time… Pain of Heartbreak!
Yeah that is so true, pain of the heartbreak is the deepest because we dont know how to fix it..
Yeah 😦
Tine to move on…those who give pain aren’t worth it…
Thank you for coming by… 🙂
Anytime;)
I have read this a couple of times… maybe its the mood I’m in or just the way you write. I keep visualizing a soldier off to war … and she gets his letter. Could be me or you or maybe because I live between 2 Army bases. Well written!!
thank you so much!! :-D.. And i totally get what you mean by a soldier off to war and the girl getting the letter in her mail.. so romantically sad.. thanks for stopping by Mike.. 🙂
I recognize all of this soo much – the strong feelings of unrequited love and the fragments of a heartbreak lingering within one’s mind. Good job, as always 🙂
Thank you.. I’m glad the emotions shone through.. and always a pleasure seeing you here.. 🙂
Thank you 😀
Hi,
I have just nominated you for the Versatile Bloggers Award.
See my home page if you are interested in accepting etc…
-Marie
Thank you so much Marie.. i’m so honored to be nominated by you. 🙂
Uhhh, Abi…. My heart breaks just reading this. Sending love and hugs 🙂
Blessings always
Thaks Scott 🙂
Hello..I read this finding something familiar. I know in any disappointment I must take my time..I know it is useless to overindulge..I also know I am so hardheaded at times..even when the answer is there..it has to feel right..your writing..even in heartache reflects hope..:-)..Peace Tony
Thank you so much, I’ts probably because i always believe that even during the darkest of times i still believe that there is always hope for happiness.. I guess i’ts because i’m a hopeless romantic and i always hope for the best..thank you for checking out my poems.. I really appreciate it.. 🙂
A very beautiful piece
I appreciate your comments.. 😀
So beautifully written.
thank you so much..:-)
beautiful, you are developing your talent of poetry and storytelling. that feeling of being heartbroken, that choking feeling your captured wonderfully in this creation. keep it up. 🙂
I believe you are my best and most favorite subscriber, i feel really happy that you enjoy my writes.. 🙂
Love this.
Thank you Maria, 🙂
“Why have you forsaken me my love..”
nice closing line, it got me 🙂
this poem is a bit long 😀 and that’s new and still nice 🙂
thought the second line doesnt make sense, i guess u should take a look at it 🙂
Beautiful, sad, and deep
Thank you Prophetshrek.. 🙂
Beautiful
Thank you. 😉