Naked….
I lie here yours for the taking…
Bare…
I lay it all out..
Exposed..
Explore as I know you desire..
Uncovered..
You leave scars on my soul..
Stripped…
You hackle away into oblivion..
Empty…
I no longer crave to subsist…
Vacant..
Eyes lost in a planet of no hope…
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Eyes lost in a planet of no hope… magnificent!
Thank you.. 🙂
…awesome poem…seems we share at least a dimension or three…^^~~~~~
shiva’s tears
“…Y yo transmitiré sin decir nada…
-Pablo Neruda
to that lover listening yet listens not
tears pelt unfallen falling fallen cold
amidst this autumn dawning yet dawns not
leaves falling not unalone still not gold
one hart in a bone cage beauty forgot
persistently refilling our clay cups
with these fragments of thunder truth forgot
insistently raindrops crushing hyssops
grief gathering sorrow without remorse
ice rumbling grumbles into rising seas
bitterness compounding lacking discourse
darkness doubles down amidst starry pleas
to that moon gathering tears thundering not
this flesh being alone howls to be forgot
so this beloved chants transmitting nothing
mark emmanuel christopher valentine
(©10 november 2012 @dafreewhitewolfe.wordpress.com)
Thank you.. 🙂
Next time,I’ll know to be sipping Iced Tea,or something,to cool me off
Beautiful Abi 🙂
hahaha…Thank you Sirrah.. 🙂
Wow!!! just amazing!!!
im glad you feel so.. 😉
planet of no hope… this sure is…
nice sensual poem 🙂
thank you Amira.. 🙂
Well titled indeed.
Thank you Ben! 🙂
Like how you built this poem around single words that lead into the next line.
A little dark! Well written.
i went to my dark side a lil bit! Thank you.. 🙂
Beautiful. I think that you should consider publishing an ebook of some of your poems.
really??! ill think about it.. 🙂 thank you so much.
Pretty. I like the idea of alternating single-word lines.
Hey, I’ve started putting up some new stuff too. Check it out if you can. 🙂
Ill do that.. thanks for coming by.. 😀 the moment i get free time ill head over to your blog.. 🙂
Lovely. 🙂