The night is dark, as terrifying demons lie in wait
I hold my armor up and prepare for battle
I put my soul at risk to destroy the monsters running in the shadows
Combat goes on for eternity under the gloomy moon
Limbs are torn and bones are crushed
Eyes glaring like empty holes on their faces
Until daylight comes and they disappear into nothingness like they never where
Leaving only whispers and veils of the war before
Scary Stuff! 😀 But so well written that I read it line by line! 🙂
Thanks Elyas!!! 😀
Agree with Elyas.. damn scary!
hahahaha!!! im glad i got some sort of reaction!! 😀
There are nights like this, consuming your peace and dreams … but let us leave them be real only in poetry, where the metaphors makes them sound whimsically beautiful!
thank you, i’m really glad that you liked it.. thank you for your comment.. 🙂
Reminds me of the Anime I have been watching 🙂
lol… what is the Anime about?
Demon slaying I think its called xxxholic and before that I watched Devil may cry
wooww!!! ok… sounds super scary!! dont think i would want to watch or read that right now because i sleep alone.. i wouldnt be able to sleep at all.. :-O
not jsut whispers and veils of the war before..
they also leave behind ME , unscathed and hopefully raring to go tonight to Kill them all again 🙂
hahahaha!! awesome ending!! maybe ill steal it!!! 😀
Wow, babygirl!! That’s a trek on the dark side 🙂 well done! xxxxooooxxxx
Thank you mom dearest!!! 😀
Dramatic and spooky.
the feeling i was going for.. thank you
Chills 🙂
thank you.. 🙂
Wow… what a visual to what I am reading now “Game Of Thrones”. There is a constant battle of souls in this!!!! I think your poem sums it up perfectly.
thank you.. i like game of thrones.. i also am reading it!! :-D… thank you
I hope thqt’s just from your poetic mind and not your real nightmares…
Powerful!
sometimes my real nightmares feel like this… but as of now, it is just my poetic mind!! thank you for stopping by!! 😀
good work, abichica!
thank you Maria!! 😀
I like this one. It was like an invisible war between light and dark. I felt the suspense as I read it. It felt like I was in a horror movie. Good job. 🙂
P.S.- Check out my post “Shout Outs” because you are one of my favorite blogs to read and the post expresses my respect, thanks for the support and sends my love for poems. Lol. Keep up the good work.
wooww!!! thank you so much for the shout out and im very glad that you enjoyed this piece.. 🙂
Get out of my head. lol Joking, but I get the poem.
hahahaha… im phsychic!! 😀
And may the best team win! (Sorry, I’m a little bit behind with some of my reading. 😳 )
no problem.. do catch up!! 😀
If only folk wouldn’t keep posting all the time! 😛
hahaha. 😀