As you lie here on my arms
Sleeping like an angle
Enjoying the rocking and rhythm of my body
I question what is on your pure mind
So simple and untouched by humanity and the world
Your cries so painful and devastating
Your laughter so jovial and carefree
ooh my child.. how i wish i could keep it so
Protect you from all the peril of this planet
I will forever hold you in a tight embrace
And i love you with senseless passion
Because you are my reason for waking up in the morning, my gift, my light, my life
Because of you i am an incurable romantic…….
chicpress 
How lovely and romantic.
thank you.. 🙂
Beautiful piece, celebrating motherhood! 🙂
thank you so much!! glad you enjoyed it!! 😀
Great beauty in this, Abi.
In a comment on my site you noted how there had been so many “coincidences” around the sea and the ocean. So strange, then, when you post “Incurable Romantic” when I recently posted “The Eternal Romantic”!!!
BTW, did you mean to write ‘angel’ here rather than ‘angle’? Both make sense, of course, but I am still left wondering. Please enlighten me, if you will.
thank you so much for your comment, and im glad you enjoy it.. wooww.. i guess there is just the coincidence of writing the same type of poems..hahaha… btw i did mean to write angle.. :-D… it probably wont make sense to some people though huh?
“Angle”. Thank you for clearing that up.
I have always loved the image in your heading. Where is it from? I have been toying with the idea of using it as the basis for a poem. Is that possible? Is it a picture of yours, or did you get it from somewhere that might not be happy if I use it?
oooh i think it would be ok if you want to use it, it is fine… the picture is from a friend of mine and they wouldnt mind.. :-D…. plus I’m kind of curious now to know how the poem will turn out… 😀
Well, I have to say the first version ended up in the bin, even the proposed title.. 🙂 Now I’m working on finishing something else. But I’ll return to it in due course. Please tell your friend I really love her painting. So atmospheric. I don’t want my words to bring it down.
Just me….if applicable, please despam me….thanks so, so much for your help!
Celeste
😀
ooh i didnt spam you my dear.. 🙂
lol….I meant could you go to your spam folder and check unspam? Askimet spammed me…. 🙂
oooh ok..
Well done. Bravo!
Thank you Rick.. 🙂
You’re welcome. Thank you for the great read.
Very nicely put, a tale of unconditional love
Thank you so much Ian!! i’m glad you enjoyed it!! 🙂
awwwwwwwww mummy dear 🙂 beautiful poem loved reading it
hahahaha… if only i was a mommy!!! 😀 very soon though… thank you and im very happy that you enjoyed it!! 😀
🙂 Oh no i did not mean that way .. I meant it as in the poem , falling in love.. for mummy dear ..
and hey congratsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss on the very sooon .. ALL The best and yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
hahaha..lol, no im not actually expecting.. :-).. i just mean some day.
Oh, this is so beautiful, Abi, and takes me down memory lane when my “young adults” were little bundles…thank you and hugs~
hahaha!! yup the good old times huh!! :-D.. im glad i could bring out some memories for ya!! 🙂
Gorgeous! Love this, abichica!
Thank you Maria!! 🙂
In one word, beautiful! 🙂
aawww… thank you so much.. that means a lot to me!! 😀
Love, love, loved it!!!! so very beautifully said my dear! love and hugs, mum
Thank you mum!! 😀 i think being a mother is the most beautiful and fulfilling, untill they become teenagers and turn your life upside down that is..hahaha….hopefully one day i will be able to experience that joy!! 🙂
It’s nice to see that spirit of a child come out in your poetry. That bond for me has never went away.
it never does!! 🙂
“So simple and untouched by humanity and the world” That was my favorite line. Absolutely, beautiful!
thats my favorite line as well.. 🙂 thanks