You make me want to kill a part of me
Just so that i wont have to feel like this
How am i supposed to shine and illuminate
When all you do is suck up all the light like a black hole
Don’t tell me it is nothing
It is a total betrayal of everything that we are
You walk besides me, completely unaware of your hold on me
What we did we did together, yet you keep tearing my heart apart
And it exploded my whole world..
Like a bombshell.
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hmmmmmmmmmmmm why wud someone not want to get out of that , i think it is good and a releif to get out ..
I can see the explosion. Nice imagery Abi! 🙂
Btw lol there is an amharic song that has similar undertone: “when your explosive love exploded, I get in trouble because of you.” 😆
Really.. ill search and listen to it.. 😀
I doubt you can search it lol since the song is in amharic and they don’t put english subtitles! 😀 If I find it on youtube I will fwd it to ya! 😉
Thank you Elyas!! 😀
Ah,the pain a heart endures..P.S. Like your new page 🙂
Thank you Sirrah!! nice to see you back here.. 🙂
Please stay away from the fuse is all I have to say… 🙂 Well written, nice imagery.
Thank you so much Mike!! :-D.. i will stay away from the fuse..
This is my favorite, it’s one part of my life story.
aww.. im glad you like it!! 🙂
Very nice write
thank so much Ian.. 🙂
That, can explode anytime eh?
yup.. 🙂
The astro imagery with the black hole is wondeful! It can truly feel like that at times when all you do is give without ever getting anything in return.
Very descriptive and creative use of imaginary
thank you, im very glad you think so… 🙂
lol
A vivid description of broken love, Abi, beautiful…
so very true.. :-).. all we can do is live
This sounds like quite a toxic relationship.
I believe it is.. but arent all relationships toxic at some points?? 😀
*All* relationships? You never struck me as being quite so cynical, Abi. 😛
hahaha.. i didnt know i could be cynical as well.. 😀
Just around the time we were leaving school my best friend and I made a pact to try and keep one another from becoming too cynical. As destiny has pulled us down diverging roads over the years I now have to rely on myself to undertake this important duty. 😉
lol.. i think you should be my new friend so that you can stop me as well from being too cynical, i mean seeing that you noticed that i am and i didnt know and all.. 🙂
I am honoured.
I just think that at least *some* relationships come without ever being toxic. I’ve been blessed with a few over the years. In fact, the toxic ones were actually in the minority. 😀
woowww is that so… i myself do not really know because i am in my first ever relationship and so far so good.. 🙂 but i have to admit it’s not really toxic, but it has had its moments of craziness..
Love is like sugar
Craziness is like salt
Without either life is tasteless
While too much of either
Quickly spoils the enjoyment
But in the right proportions
Ah, how to describe it?
I do not have the skill
Still I know it when I taste it
And want to lick the platter clean
aawww… this is sooo beautiful.. 🙂
It was your words that inspired mine.
aaww.. thank you so much!! 🙂
Nice one! Lovely imagery.
thank you so much!! i appreciate that.. 🙂