You lay me across your chest
Sated and deliciously exhausted we cling to each other
I play with your chest hair between my fingers
For the thousandth time admiring how ruggedly manly you are
“ Will you stay with me forever?” I question idly
” Darling some questions are better unanswered“
In a husky and lazy voice you answered, planting a kiss on my head
Jerking my head up i stare into your dark sexy eyes
Yearning and longing to excavate the thoughts in your beautiful head
Yet getting lost and distracted by my sudden surge of desire for you
There is nothing sexier than a man’s sleepy eyes
“Sleep, you seem delightfully drained“
You purred with a feral half smile as you lay my head on your masculine chest
My chest tightened , my heart was straining with my love for you
Why does this feel like you are saying goodbye
I wondered as i drifted off to sleep..
chicpress 
WHEW! Sensual and sad, a beautifully written piece!
Thank you so much.. 🙂
The question is better left unanswered? That sounds like goodbye to me. The young man probably has alternative ideas concerning “forever”. Post full of passion, sending sensations through heart and skin. These fears may be genuine; it cannot last forever. Lovely and creative. Intriguing, enticing or tempting!
wow! im very flattered.. I think she asked a question that most women always want to ask but of course are always afraid of the type of response they shall get.
I like it. Very good use of emotions
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Thank you Albert.. 🙂
Your very welcome
now that is one passionate poem ..
and I dont know what to say about the answer by the young man .. I guess it is best left unanswered or at least till its the RIGHT time
I guess you are right Bikram… The time shall come for the answer to be said.. 🙂
Perfect title and very well written. ‘excavate the thoughts…’ love it!!!
Thanks Mike.. 😀
Man lives life through desire, woman through feeling. Therein lies the mystery, he won’t until he knows the woman in him…
woow! iv never thought of it this way.. thanks for opening my eyes.. 🙂
wonderful poem ending in a sad mental scar type of thought
Thank you Bruce..lovely seeing you here. 🙂
Beautiful
A thousand thank yous.. 🙂
Once again,had to turn on fan,for it got hot 🙂
Wonderful
Thank you Sirrah!! 😀
Since no one really knows what the question is , Enjoy silk pillows and sheets ! This is very nice ! Thanks for visiting my blog !
Thank you for coming by as well.. 🙂
Wonderfully sensuous! You’ve described it very well. I guess the girl’s feelings are mirrored by all of us. We want to hold on and on… when it’s best to enjoy the moment and let go. isn’t it?
Thats very true.. 🙂
abichica,
this is so well written and convincing, and sad.
happy to see you writing!!
Thank you Maria.. i have been quite busy for some time now with exams and all, but now im free.. 🙂
Best wishes and prayers for your goals with school work! Glad you have more free time right now!
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Thank you.. 🙂
Most impressive! Your narration truly made me believe I was there 😀
I was greatly moved by this. You have a real talent.
ooh my, thank you so much, its such a pleasure to hear that you were moved by it.. 🙂
This is beautiful and well written. I was carried away in the emotion 🙂
Thank you so very much.. im glad.. 🙂
❤ Your welcome