I tell you i love you
You run for the hills
I tell you you are mine
You frown in disbelief
I hold you close wishing you would do the same
You hold me lightly and feebly
Questioning my every action
Oh my darling why do you doubt me so?
Why has this fear gripped your heart?
Ours could be the love spoken of in poem,
Sang about in songs,
Written about in novels,
Danced about by ballerinas,
Our souls,bodies and hearts could be eternally intertwined
If only you can push through the pain..
So very beautiful…just a small correction should “disbelieve” be “disbelief?” Love the last line…Quote “If only you can push through the pain” something we wish for all of us. loverly!
thanks for the correction.. :-).. and yes we all wish for that all the time.. 🙂
lovely!
It is always a pleasure seeing your comments.. 🙂 thank you
romantic ..
but going on tangent why shud we need to ask the love to go through it .. they shud do it on their own for us.. that is what love is 🙂
Beautiful expression! I see the emphasis on the reluctance of this lover, I hope his mind is not on some other lover else where? You have a very emotional use of words and I love it! Great post, Abichica! 🙂
You have the awesome skill of continuous inspiration and beautiful writing. Always loving to read your work Abi. Saaaaweeeet!
aaww.. thanks a bunch Scott.. :-D.. *blushing*
I was moved by this post. Does your poem stem from your imagination or from personal experience?
well this one is purely from imagination.. some of my poems are personal but most of them are from imagination.. 😀
Wonderful Abi…
Thank you sirrah
So beautifully put.
Thank you so much! 😀
you write lovely poetry .. So glad you dropped by and I discovered your blog ..Love 🙂
aaww.. thank you, i like your blog too.. 🙂
Wonderful, Abichica!
Thank you Maria! 🙂
Love the poem and the pic… kinda brings it home for me…perfect choice!!!
Thanks Mike.. appreciate your comment.. 🙂
And now their love was made into a wonderful poem! Well done Abi 😀
aaaww.. thank you.. 🙂
Ah, the remembrances of love unreturned. Your last line is especially powerful for most of us fear love, though we long for it. Well done! hugs, pat
Thank you once again Pat… And you are very right, we do fear love.. 🙂
Wonderful….classic….timeless…..
woow! Thank you so much! 🙂