Stormy nights or summer breezes..
The sun rises and sets with you..
Devoid of you I die a thousand deaths..
Feeling a violent thunderstorm swelling profoundly within me..
I wait impatiently for you to gift me with your exquisiteness..
In the mist of you, I soar up into the air..
Loving you a bit too treacherously..
Like Icarus, flying too close to the sun..
chicpress 
Hmmm i cant make up my mind sad or what ..
maybe a little bit of sadness mixed with happiness.. 🙂
Very nice comparison at the end…. I feel it brought the whole poem together.
Thanks….
always my pleasure Mike.. 🙂
nice write and well thought out
Thank you Bruce.. i appreciate that. 🙂
Wow, that sums love up for me… Beautiful!
woow.. thank you.. 🙂
Like me you give more power over yourself to the object of your desire than you should.
Like good old Icarus you may be in for a crash.
Beautiful work.
Thank you Bill. and im afraid u are right about me giving power over myself over the subject of my desires
Beautiful!
Gracias!! lovely seing you here.. 🙂
Ahhhh….but what a love worth having, giving and dying for…..this is my kind of love…..you wrote this with so much passion and style….I can feel the winds from your heart and soul as I read it, and I am left with feelings of true love and romance….few words put so impacting…..loved it Abbi!
Love to you
Celeste
aawww.. Celeste, love right back to you as well!!! 😀 thank you for coming by
You are welcome! I have part 14 published in case you were still interested. Hope you are having a great weekend! Big hugs! ❤
yeyyyy!! im so glad.. i have been checking your blog everyday since i last read part 13.. :-).. getting to it right now
“in the mist of you.” Rockin. This poem’s a volcano.
oooh my.. thank you so much!! 😀
Words stunningly beautiful, Abi, so full of passion and love~Sending hugs!
Oh my, thank you so much!! im truly flattered!! 😀
so sweet…:)
Thank you so much.. 🙂 i appreciate that
Love, at times make you feel devastated at times jubilant.Without love, there’s no life.
wonderful poem Abi. Loved it. 🙂
Thank you Dakshi.. And you are right, without love there is no life.. 🙂
The last line says it all! Beautiful poem!
thank you very much! Glad you think so 🙂