Last night i had a dream about you
You walked towards me barefoot
Twinkles in your warm soft brown eyes
I worshiped you with my heart
You opened your arms to embrace me
I moved easily into a place i thought home
But it is not my body you hold
It is my tear soaked heart
Devil in disguise you are
Ripped me open you did
As i lay unmoving watching you cackle
As you smash my heart against a brick wall
Watching my heart crack open and drip out
I am left to sorrowfully conjecture
With a rattled soul i shall depart this earth..
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….too much sorrow in this life, sometimes I wonder how long it will take………, yet the grief is beautiful when it’s told through poetry. Besides, its good to let it out this way. I’m sure I’m repeating myself now… 🙂
Be well now Abi
Love//Eclipse
lol, its ok to repeat yourself.. thank you Eclipse! 🙂
So much pain breathed nicely here…
Peace & Light
Welcome Mira and thank you so much! 🙂
Very powerful and poignant. You have such a wonderful talent you are able to reach out and pull the reader into the emotion. I am thankful God has given you this talent to share.
ooh my.. Thank you so much, Im so happy to hear that.. 🙂
Almost hard to explain in words how beautifully this is written and felt. Nice work as always Abi
Thank you so much Scott, i really appreciate it. Always a pleasure to see you here.. 🙂
Such emotion bleeding between each line.
As always,
aaww.. Thank you Sirrah! 🙂
the words touched my heart
by heartbeat quickened when the embrace made a homely place
and then it missed a beat when the embrace was only meant to pull the heartstrings apart
nicely written 🙂
Thank you Amira,im glad you were touched.. 🙂
Ooh gosh – the devil in disguise took me by surprise!
Pretty raw stuff! I hope you’re ok…
Im ok my dear.. 🙂 thanks for coming by..
Abi, I felt your pain dripping through your words…very well written, my friend~Sending hugs!
Lauren
Thanks Lauren… i appreciate it.. 🙂
nicely written, such sadness conveyed so well
Thank you Bruce! 🙂
It is as Paulo Coelho said, ”Words are tears that have been written down. Tears are words that need to be shed. Without them, joy loses all its brilliance and sadness has no end”. Perfectly written, it is personal, i can almost feel your pain through your words, and that’s what makes great writing in my opinion.
Edison Henrique.
Thank you so much Edison… A pleasure to have you here.. and i believe all my poetry is personal on some level.. 🙂
Each word felt so real,strong expressions…
Thank you so much for your great comment.. 🙂
Watching my heart crack open and drip out
I really felt this line. 🙂
I never fell in love but I feel all the emotions in this poem! very well written 🙂 ❤
Oh God that was pain in every line…and so beautifully woven..
Thank you Soma..
Well it started off so serene and then it hit me!!!!
lol, im glad i caught you by surprise Mike. It has been a long time since i saw you by my blog, welcome. 🙂
Not the typical tale of rejection. You manage to avoid all the clichés. 🙂
why thank you dear sir!! 🙂
Wow. Incredible
Thank you dear sir.. 🙂
Powerful and sad!
Thank you.. 🙂 welcome to my blog