I knew light…
Danced around the light…
Rejoiced in the radiance…
Basked under it’s luminasity…
Until you came around…
And stole my light away…
Consumed it right from beneath me…
Leaving only a shardowy gloom…
Bathing me in your darkness…
chicpress
chicpress 
hmmmmmmmm well the good lord says when one door closes another opens .. and then Light will come again
Take care
Thank you, it is what i am praying for. 🙂
Beautiful, and sensual, then sad, tragic. Very poignant and powerful verse.
Thank you. 🙂
🙂
This is good, but I *so* wish for a second stanza, in which the light does indeed return. I suppose we need to be patient. 🙂
(BTW Do you want to know that there is a typo in Line 4?)
Thanks for letting me know, ill fix it. And patience is a virture, the light just might return. 🙂
I hope so.
…luminosity…can u send me a copy of the photo?…betrayal is brutal, a bitter cup…yet it is crucible which will refine your craft & art…explore the relationship between fidelity & infidelity…a broken & unbroken hart…stay in touch…<3
You are so right.. thank you for coming by
why not! we have been following each other off & on 4 years now! ur poetry had yet to disappoint! ^^~~~~~
*blushing*.. You never disappoint either.. 😀
❤
…i did not know i was missing u until u came back into my life…i asked u 4 a copy of the pix?…did i miss it?…would like to danse a duet with your words beautiful poet…send pix to mecvalrntine@gmail.com s’il vous plait…luv this poem!!!
simply awesooooooooooooome
You are too sweet. Thank you. 🙂
Photo insert obviously luminasty….thumbs-up!
Thank you. 🙂