You are a stiff drug for me..
Toxic and acidic to my heart
Devouring me up from the inside out..
I’m in a constant fog..
Trying but failing desperately to remember my life before you..
You blind me from seeing the rest of the world..
Fueling my frantic need for you..
My dependency of you is an ache..
An ache which morphs into a physical pain..
When i’m away from you I can not bare it..
You open my rib cage and leave my soul exposed..
My core drilled and etched away..
You are my needle, my anxiety, my morphine..
You unnaturally enjoys my suffering..
Watching me sadistically and giving me a wicked smile..
Your distance brings about a state of confusion, perplexity, mystery..
A feeling of deep and utter loss..
Feelings of bereavement bring about withdrawal symptoms..
And I have no way of preventing this angst..
Moving.
Sean King
Thank you Sean… 🙂
Doesn’t sound like an entirely healthy relationship or am I getting hold of the wrong end of the stick?
You are right Kevin.. relationships like this drain a person and leave them unable to function without the other person there.
Beautifully written, some relationships are indeed like a addiction……
Very true.. 🙂 thanks for coming by
Amazing and beautiful…
Thank you so much!
Heartbreak sure can be toxic. Well written.
Thank you so much. :-).. Heartbreak sure can be toxic
Perrrrrfect title… “drilled and etched away..” love it!!!
ooh Mike.. thank you so much. 🙂
Love is truly like a drug. I love how you sue the metaphor of fog to describe love. It’s invisible, natural, and invades your body with every breath. It poisons you, clouds memory and judgment, and looms over the entire world.
so right! It makes you feel like that. 🙂
You describe this situation so vividly. As to your conclusion
“And I have no way of preventing this angst.”
let me offering a slightly less pessimistic one. 🙂
http://bennaga.wordpress.com/2013/04/24/brokenhearted/
Wow! Powerfully poetic, and as creative as always!
Thank you so much.. I appreciate that. 🙂
Oh no. If this is about you, please don’t let the guy have the upper hand. You’re a beautiful strong woman. 🙂
Thank you for your concern Sanah, and fortunately it is not about me.
Very honest and deeply expressed.
Thank you so much.. I always appreciate your comments.. 🙂
Perfect depiction of a dependent relationship.
very true.. thanks Anissa
Excellent.. I Enjoy the raw feeling u write with.
Thank you. 🙂