You used to be my sunshine
The light that shines my path
But now you are the darkness that glooms above
The shadows passing behind me
I yearn for your deep, husky, sinister embraces
The small glow of light that guides me to the future is slowly blowing off
Now I’m left here all alone
In the dark
Unable to find my way
Locked away to rot forever in this senseless abyss of sever loneliness
hmmm that is sad .. but why let someone dictate your life .. Get out of it .. there is someone somewhere who is gonna undo everything that is happened ..
very true, sadness does not last forever, that somewhere is alive there somewhere waiting.. 🙂 thanks for coming by Bikram
ohh, Abi!! I just can’t believe how deeply and creatively you can write. So profound and heart breaking. Very beautiful work here!
Thank you so much Scott..
All things happen for a reason. Something else is coming your way. 🙂
Thank you, and you are very right.. 🙂
Wonderfully chaotic and depressing. I love how the narrator longs for the “sinister embraces” even though they, obviously, are hurting her.
thank you so much!! glad you enjoyed it, it was quite rattling to write it.. 🙂
Love is both uplifting – and sad. Lovely writing.
Thank you so much!! 🙂
abichica, all the words you chose add up, accumulating:
Wow! So very awful, this brokenness!
Keep writing your heart out and trust…!
“Out of the depths have I cried to Thee, O Lord!”
i am so glad it has touched you Maria!! thank you for coming by and i promise to keep on writing.. 🙂
Pensive and heartbreaking, though I enjoyed reading it.
i’m glad you did!! 🙂
wonderful somber notes.
thank you so much.. 🙂
Hi 🙂 that picture with the poem is exactly what I would like to put with a fan fiction of mine. Would you mind if I use it?? 🙂
no,please knock yourself out!! 🙂
Thank you so much!
those words talk to me 🙂
eerie but it does really.
“you used to be my sunshine … but now you are the darkness”
I’m glad i could connect with you.. 🙂