You turned me over love
You are a path to the heart that knows it own way
You dazzle me with your bright shinning star
And leave your prints on me
You know not your own depth until the hour of separation
You Leave me low and torn
You gut me open with your big claws
You drive me to the ends of the world
Then leave me stranded with no way to get back
Meeting you in my dreams is only torture
Because then i awake reaching for you to no avail
Love why do you wound me so bad?
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I love this piece !
I’m glad!! 🙂
very touching…..very sad…..very good!
tom
Thank you Tom!! 🙂
Wow — does this turn dark with that third line. Very full of power and emotion! Really enjoyed.
Sorry for not visiting in a while as been on vacation (used up what little time I had today posting vacation photos on facebook — no internet connection last few weeks (had auto-scheduled my posts at zumpoems.com) and cannot access WordPress at work — so will do my best to visit when I can on weekends.)
aaww.. Thank you, i appreciate you coming even if it’s just once in a while.. I will look forward to your visits.. 😀
that is the million dollar question, isn’t it? Great job girly-girl!! smiles, hugs and blessings, mom
Thanks dear mom!! 😀 XOXO
Very descriptive and creative. I ENJOYED it.
Thank you, im glad you like it.. 🙂
this is awesome
Oh the games love plays ….meandering through the vallies before it stops and finds us..hugs ans love 🙂
loved the header 🙂
Thank you Soma, love does play hurtful and torturous games with our hearts.. 🙂
All this time that I have been following you, I have seen your growth. Wonderful!~
aaww, thank you so much, im glad i have grown, it shows progress on my part.. 🙂
questions which are difficult to answer ..
i guess love comes in all shapes ..
beautiful poem
It really does!!! 😀 Thank you 🙂
Aww, I love this! This is exactly what it feels like at times doesn’t it? Great work Abi! 🙂
It really is exactly how it feels at certain times.. Thank you for your comment Bianca.. 🙂
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Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate it.. 🙂
Great piece! 🙂
Thank you Elyas.. 😀
Love is on the air… hahaha…
nice poem…
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I’m not sure if love is in the air, it seems heartache is in the air.. 🙂
Abi, very good!
These lines I like a lot:
“You drive me to the ends of the world
Then leave me stranded with no way to go back”
So sad, yet said well!
Thank you so much, i’m very glad you enjoyed it… 🙂
Niceee! ‘Leave your prints on me…” I like that line and its sad but true. Love does that, it leave prints that sometimes never goes away.
so true, no matter what you do the prints just stay there
Beautiful Piece Chica
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Thanks Chica
DarkJade-
Beautifully written Abi 😦
Thank you Scott.. 🙂
i haven’t come across a better illustration such as in your header image. wow. congrats. congrats, once again.
wooww!! Thank you so much!! im very glad that you like it.. 🙂
Very moving piece. By the way, did you change your banner? I love it!!!
Yes, i did, you are the first person who noticed.. 😀
So true!
:-).. the troubles of life and love.. 🙂
so u were stranded 😦 such a bad feeling 😦 but u r still awesome with ur words 🙂
hahaha, thank you so much!! 🙂 and yeah it is a horrible feeling.
it’s indeed
Heartbreaking, yet captivating…..this is very good….
lots of love
Celeste
Thank you Celeste!! lots of love right back at you.. 🙂
Is such a ravaging survivable?
torn heart strings and fibre repairable?
only inside the shield of love
you can find armour for life and living.
x
so true, sometimes i feel as if it is not survivable at all.. Thanks for coming by.. 🙂
Are you okay? This was your last post and I haven’t seen you around until I saw a couple likes from you today. I’ve been to sick to realize it until now, sorry! I’m worried about you though. Are you just busy or is something wrong? You can e-mail or just leave me a reply if busy is the answer 🙂 hugs and smooches, mom
Reblogged this on Greatpoetrymhf’s Weblog and commented:
This young writer has the eyes of ages
ooh wow, thank you so much.. you made my day. 🙂
True beauty in words
Thank you so much Willow.. 🙂
I’m in love with this poem. Lol.
I aim to please.. 🙂
@ abichica- i see. Lol