Love is a divine
Fruit of spirit
Come sweet love
Rest upon me
Till our nature is transformed
Love soar to glory
Descend to sorrow
Grace connected to eternity
Sweet from the eye
Closely binding two souls
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love is so delicious
It is, isnt it.. 😀
Oh, I think this is one of my absolute favorites!! I loved it, Abi!! and you 🙂 xoxo
Thank you Mummy dearest!! 😀 xoxo
blinding two souls … wow what a punchline! 🙂
Love it!!!
Im glad you believe so.. 🙂
*binding … lol
Beautiful 🙂
Thank you.. 🙂
Extreemely cute! 🙂
Have a wonderful evening Abi…
Love//Eclipse
Thanks Eclipse, im glad you liked it.. 😀
This is so natural and beautiful. Very economical but not compressed. Just wonderfully natural. And not all roses and kisses: “Love soar to glory Descend to sorrow” gives us both the light and the shading. Well done!
Thank you, i believe its the first time i have posted anything of this kind on my blog, and i really wanted to show a different side to my poetry.. im glad you enjoyed it.. 🙂
I got all Adam and Evey with this one! i shall try to describe my inerpretations in ….can I use italics? we’ll see…
Love is a divine
Fruit of spirit
I recalled that divine fruit from that divine knowledge of good/evil tree that
the trinity god/jesus/holy ghost gave to Adam and Eve.
Come sweet love
Rest upon me
Till our nature is transformed
Love soar to glory
Bliss! Before the downfall. Adam and eve sweet, resting, loving peaceful
and content and then…….
Descend to sorrow
They bit it. No matter who is at fault. They both bit it.
Grace connected to eternity
Sweet from the eye
Closely binding two souls
But God’s grace was not lost to them. They had a much harder life
but bound together by the loyalty or love, they persisted!
I love how, to me, you told that story in poem form so succintly and romantically, focusing on the good that came out of tinkering with the forbidden fruit . And who knows if that is even remotely where you were going with this. THAT is why poetry is the most musical of the written genres: because it can be written and spoken in so many different ways, and multiple perceptions weave themselves out of it like a colorful crocheted afghan.
you are very write, the beauty of poetry is that it can speak to us in many different ways and make us feel many different feelings.. We all understand poetry differently, and i love what you have done with it.. :-D.. thanks for stopping by
Beautiful 🙂
Thank you Sparkly Angel.. 🙂
You write so well. I enjoy reading you blog.
PS thank you for the wonderful comments too!
thank you for your comments as well.. :-).. i’m glad you enjoy my writes..
Your poetry feeds me every time I read it. Keep the courses coming!
Thank you Mike, i sure will make sure they keep on coming..:-)
Your poetry is very lovely and heartfelt.
Thank you.. i’m glad you enjoy it..:-)
Beautiful poem!
Thank you Tena.. 🙂
Captivating and from the heart 🙂
Thank you.. 🙂 Glad i captivated you
Perfect illustration of two hearts joining together. Love can fill every hole 😀
Nicely said…Love can fill every whole.. 🙂
short and sooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet 🙂 i love this one too 🙂
Im glad you are going through my poems and that you are enjoying them.. 🙂
so far so awesome 😀 am having the time of my life 😀 and i never felt this way before 😀 and i swear this is true 😀 and i owe it all to u 😀 hehehehe [BLACK EYED PEAS – THE TIME] 😀