Love feed my soul

Love is a divine

Fruit of spirit

Come sweet love

Rest upon me 

Till our nature is transformed

Love soar to glory

Descend to sorrow

Grace connected to eternity

Sweet from the eye

Closely binding two souls

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32 thoughts on “Love feed my soul

  1. This is so natural and beautiful. Very economical but not compressed. Just wonderfully natural. And not all roses and kisses: “Love soar to glory Descend to sorrow” gives us both the light and the shading. Well done!

    • Thank you, i believe its the first time i have posted anything of this kind on my blog, and i really wanted to show a different side to my poetry.. im glad you enjoyed it.. 🙂

  2. I got all Adam and Evey with this one! i shall try to describe my inerpretations in ….can I use italics? we’ll see…
    Love is a divine
    Fruit of spirit
    I recalled that divine fruit from that divine knowledge of good/evil tree that
    the trinity god/jesus/holy ghost gave to Adam and Eve.

    Come sweet love
    Rest upon me
    Till our nature is transformed
    Love soar to glory
    Bliss! Before the downfall. Adam and eve sweet, resting, loving peaceful
    and content and then…….
    Descend to sorrow
    They bit it. No matter who is at fault. They both bit it.

    Grace connected to eternity
    Sweet from the eye
    Closely binding two souls
    But God’s grace was not lost to them. They had a much harder life
    but bound together by the loyalty or love, they persisted!

    I love how, to me, you told that story in poem form so succintly and romantically, focusing on the good that came out of tinkering with the forbidden fruit . And who knows if that is even remotely where you were going with this. THAT is why poetry is the most musical of the written genres: because it can be written and spoken in so many different ways, and multiple perceptions weave themselves out of it like a colorful crocheted afghan.

    • you are very write, the beauty of poetry is that it can speak to us in many different ways and make us feel many different feelings.. We all understand poetry differently, and i love what you have done with it.. :-D.. thanks for stopping by

      • so far so awesome 😀 am having the time of my life 😀 and i never felt this way before 😀 and i swear this is true 😀 and i owe it all to u 😀 hehehehe [BLACK EYED PEAS – THE TIME] 😀

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