The end is upon us
I can feel it throbbing through my bones
I can see the devotion fading from your eyes
I can sense the poison of dislike pulsating through my veins
The bond we took time to build is wilting into nothingness
Forever we have tried to keep it alive, to keep the fire blazing
The more i accelerate the fire, the more you throw sand on the fire
We forever work against each other in this fight
Is it not right for us to just throw in the towel
Is our union worth the brawl
Really nice!! … 🙂
Thank you.. 🙂
Very good writing of the subject.
Uh, that’s possibly one of the hardest times in life “The end”
it really is, when it’s the end and you know it is but don’t really know how to end it, it’s the hardest time. Thank you for coming by. 🙂
“Forever we have tried to keep it alive, to keep the fire blazing”
For me that line is the pivot upon which the remainder piece spins, echoing its recurrence across eternity.
Thats very true Ben.. Thank you for coming by. 😀
Such a important subject — one almost all of us have dealt with. Very well handled and appropriately sad.
Thank you Zumpoems, always a please seeing you here.. 😀
Truly feeling this poem. It is where I am right now.
Wooww.. im sorry to hear that, i hope that you will get out of it some day soon.. I’ts really a terrible place to be.
nice. history wins a lot, but not always
yeah, very true, sometimes history is not enough to keep people together.. 🙂
you know I love you and I love your poem as well! Be blessed and safe tomorrow. Happy Thanksgiving!
Thank you dear mom.. Happy thanks giving right back at you.. :-)..xoxo
abichica, I like following your blog! The only thing that worries me is whether you’re experiencing some of the bad things you write about. But I’m beginning to think you aren’t…Good! Blessings to you! Happy Thanksgiving!
lol.. i know, most people always think that i go through all that i write about, but the truth is some of the poems are inspired by things in my life, but most of my writes are just from my crazy imagination.. :-).. Happy thanks giving
I felt the pain and agony of defeat. Relationship is work. It takes two to constantly build, nurture/feed, and pamper. Sadly, most people fail on the work part once the courting is over. Beautiful expressive, moving poem. Keep up the good work.
Thank you, and yes its true, a relationship takes work and effort, but most people never wanna put in the work, they think just being in love is enough, but it isnt..
You are amazing! I love it~
Thank you so much..:-)
Not sure… about the worth it… seen too many relationships in constant bickering mode. Your prose is perfect… I still get great visuals.
Thank you Mike, sometimes people are so confused about whether to stay in a relationship like this or not.. 🙂
The moment right before a breakup, right when you know it’s about to happen, is just so… Lovely. Sleeping around with women and partying all night is the best thing ever.
Kidding – it’s horrible to lose your partner (though the single life can be preeeetty awesome at times 😉 )
I beleive that something that one has worked so hard shud not go to waste and one shud try all means to revive it ..
wwoooww!! I believe you are the first person to actually say that.. Most people believe you should just let things go..Thank you for coming by Bikram.. 🙂
Thank you, glad you like it.. 🙂
I love this, but I really hope this does not mean it could be “the end” for you. Never a good time to go through. You write beautifully!
Thank you Jamiegall.. :-D..
the end is really an unfortunate feeling, because in our hearts we wish for relationships to flourish. nevertheless this is a wonderful creation.
Thank you so much, im so glad you enjoy my creations.. 😀
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wooooooooooooow that’s awesooooooooooooooome
very short lines that tell a looooooooooooooooot
life can be so cruel that way i know 😦
nice poem 🙂
Thank you so much.. im glad you enjoyed it.. 🙂 life can be cruel and writing is a way to let it out!! 🙂
indeed it’s 😀 a lot of time whn i feel that way i just start writing about it 🙂
i hope u will like my blog 🙂
i liked this poem a lot and i hope to read more poems for u 🙂