The End Is Near…

The end is upon us

I can feel it throbbing through my bones
I can see the devotion fading from your eyes
I can sense the poison of dislike pulsating through my veins
The bond we took time to build is wilting into nothingness
Forever we have tried to keep it alive, to keep the fire blazing
The more i accelerate the fire, the more you throw sand on the fire
We forever work against each other in this fight
Is it not right for us to just throw in the towel
Is our union worth the brawl

35 thoughts on “The End Is Near…

  1. abichica, I like following your blog! The only thing that worries me is whether you’re experiencing some of the bad things you write about. But I’m beginning to think you aren’t…Good! Blessings to you! Happy Thanksgiving!

    • lol.. i know, most people always think that i go through all that i write about, but the truth is some of the poems are inspired by things in my life, but most of my writes are just from my crazy imagination.. :-).. Happy thanks giving

  2. I felt the pain and agony of defeat. Relationship is work. It takes two to constantly build, nurture/feed, and pamper. Sadly, most people fail on the work part once the courting is over. Beautiful expressive, moving poem. Keep up the good work.

  3. The moment right before a breakup, right when you know it’s about to happen, is just so… Lovely. Sleeping around with women and partying all night is the best thing ever.

    Kidding – it’s horrible to lose your partner (though the single life can be preeeetty awesome at times πŸ˜‰ )

  4. I love this, but I really hope this does not mean it could be “the end” for you. Never a good time to go through. You write beautifully!

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  6. wooooooooooooow that’s awesooooooooooooooome
    very short lines that tell a looooooooooooooooot
    life can be so cruel that way i know 😦
    nice poem πŸ™‚

      • indeed it’s πŸ˜€ a lot of time whn i feel that way i just start writing about it πŸ™‚
        i hope u will like my blog πŸ™‚
        i liked this poem a lot and i hope to read more poems for u πŸ™‚

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