I want you to be my full time admirer
Will you please stay with me.
Lets run away to paradise
When I’m with you our hearts beat as one
Every time you walk out of the door i long for you
I ache for your touch
For you sweet lingering kisses
For your caressing searching look
All i know is that we are the perfect match
We fit together because we were made for each other
If i asked you to love me forever would you agree
Because i will love you forever and a day..
Advertisements
Beautiful, Abi! Full of emotion and very well conveyed. Proud of you girl, you are really coming into your own with your writing! I read your part 5 too but don’t remember if I left a comment? It was very good too! Huge hugs and kisses, “Mom”
Thanx Teresa.. im glad you liked it.. I’m really starting to write more and more everyday now.. :-D.. Huge hugs and kisses right back at you.. 😀
As always, a very tender vulnerable love poem!
Thank you.. :-).. always a pleasure to see you here.. 😀
Hmmmmmmm loved it
:-).. a thousand gratitudes..
Lovely!
:-).. thanks
Ok Abby… great title. I could not figure out were I heard that phrase before… so did a little digging. “Taming of the Shrew” Shakespeare, a contract “old law” meaning a year and a day, new Filipino movie, Kelly Rowlands music title…. but the best of all is your meaning ” to love for ever”. I grew up hearing this and other phrases from older members in my family so could not remember why it struck a chord. Thanks for a great poem and bringing up fond memories.
i’m glad i could remind you of the good old days.. :-).. i was actually listening to Kelly Rowland’s song when i suddenly felt the need to write this poem.. 🙂
He definitely will…you have a beautiful way with words girl.
Thank you so much.. You truly flatter me.. 😀
Nice to see a new poem from you. There is such an honesty in your style. Whether is comes naturally or you have to go through several drafts to get this, the end result is a very open, honest work that hasn’t a hint of contrivance or artificiality. Very well done!
aaaww!! thank you so much.. I really appreciate that.. 🙂
So you know your gonna have to come & share on my page right? 🙂
This was a very well written piece!! Two Sunny Thumbs up!
Thanks Sunny.. soon i will come and share on your page.. 😀
That is awesome! It moved me.
Thank you so much!! :-).. and welcome to my blog.. always great to see someone new.. 😀
Okay I will patiently wait!
😀
the title of the poem is awesome , so is the poem !
Thanks.. 😀
NiCe! 🙂 … what happened to forever and ever!? 😛 Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing!!
And looks like there has been another housecleaning lol … love the new look of your blog. 🙂
Im glad you do.. always changing it up to keep it interesting.. 😀
awww, this is so cute! Thanks for leaving a comment on my blog, by the way.
No problem.. Thanks to you as well.. 🙂
another good one!
🙂
Moving and so well expressed…love the title… 🙂
Thanks.. 😀 that means a lot to me knowing people enjoy my poetry.. 🙂
Lovely =)
Thank you.. 🙂
A beautiful write i loved it 🙂
Thank you so much!! 😀
Beautiful. Describes my Wife and I after 31 years together. We still long for each other when we are apart.
Thank you and God bless. Keep up the great work.
http://anciljones.wordpress.com
I’m so happy for you, now days marriages do not last for so long, its good to see that people are still happy and still madly in love after 31 years of being together. Thank you checking out my poem.. 🙂
It’s an incomparable feeling of love. May we all managed to get eternal love
I hope so too.. :-).. thank you for dropping by
Wow, you can really Write… So Heart Felt
DarkJade-
Thank you, i’m very flattered.. 🙂
wowwwwwwwwwwww.
Very flattered. 😀
and never say never again 😀 it rhymes with a song called never say never 😀
it’s quiet nice 🙂