I now serve my heart on a silver platter to you
I may have not known what i was doing when we met
Or even if i was doing it right
But the one thing i was sure about was that ours is love that was destined
Time has designed and waited for our love to be born and to mature
The feel of you by my side is exactly as it should be
Fresh, new, intoxicating with a thrill of danger yet so excitingly natural
The flow of your words is music to my ears
Like a flock of beautifully swaying birds singing melodies for us and us alone
This world is yet to see what our love will develop
But the day shall come that songstresses and poets will write about us
They will write of how we used to take long walks along the shore
Of how i used to tell you all about my day
Even if it was not interesting you still listened as if it was the last and most important thing in this world
Of how we fought and jumped huddles just to get a small glimpse of each other
Sweetheart can’t you see, they will tell of our undying and everlasting love..
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This is beautiful too Abi! Very nicely written and true as well. I loved it! Hugs and kisses, “Mom”
aaww.. i love that you signed out as “mom”.. Thanx Teresa.. Much more hugs and kisses right back at you, “Daughter” 😀
romantic!keep writing!
Thank you.. Welcome to my bog, i hope you will check out more of my poems.. 😀
This was just wonderful. I love how you portrayed Love. A beautiful poem, keep up the good work.
Thank you so much.. SO glad you enjoyed it.. 🙂
Great Scott! I need to meet your muse and ask him what is he doing right!
Hahahaha!!! Maybe one day you will.. 😀
Wow .. so whst does HE have ot say about this he he he he 🙂 and I hope when you give it on a plate it is honoured and loved toooo 🙂 all the best and god bless
romantic one …
He hasnt actually seen it yet.. But he will soon. And he does cherish and honor it.. Thank you Bikram.. 😀
Fabulous 🙂
:-D.. Thank you
This is absolutely beautiful! Thank you!
Thank YOU for stopping by.. 😀
Endless sounds right… if we could have just half of this devotion in our lives it we be sooooo sweet.
I know right.. There would be less fights and less heart aches.. 😀
Such devotion – a rare and lovely find!
Thank you so much.. 😀
i was expecting to read the next episode of your story. looks like we have to wait. not that it is bad but i’m so attached to the story and want to read till the end. 🙂
this poem is magical, how sweet is the feeling of everlasting love, only love and no sorrows and quarrels. keep writing.
Thank you.. And the ending is coming soon.. i promise.. :-D.. I’m glad you like it so much that you are looking forward to it..:-)
That was such a sweet poem! Love can truly be a wonderful thing 🙂
Thank you.. Love makes the world go round.. 🙂
Beautiful, yet I feel even that word does this work no justice
OOh my.. Thank you so much.. i’m so flattered.. 🙂
“The flow of your words is music to my ears” perfect way to describe your own work~ Love is great and you perfectly capture that within this poem 🙂
I’m glad to know that my words entice you.. :-D..Thank you
Hello.
My first time here from Dakshi’s blog.
To give love and be loved in return is the greatest expression of human beauty.
You penned this beautifully.
Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Welcome Andy.. :-)… thank you for your lovely comment. hope you can stick around my blog and check out more of my poetry… 🙂
They’re right, abichica! This is lovely and good!
I’m glad you also feel that way Maria.. :-)..
Beautiful imagery! Well done!
Thank you so much!! 😀
Can’t help aw aw awing as I read this, just lovely!
aaaww!!! im glad you like it that much.. 🙂
That is so touchingly deep and lovely…
Thank you so much.. 🙂
Another good poem! Thank you!
Thank you for coming by and commenting.. 😀
“Like a flock of beautifully swaying birds singing melodies for us and us alone
This world is yet to see what our love will develop
But the day shall come that songstresses and poets will write about us”
why so beautiful 😀 “joker style” 😀
i so love ur picturing of events and those three lines were amazing 🙂