As she sprinted across the hard pavement barefoot
Her sun deprived skin greatly soaking in all the blazing heat
She could hear all the yelling and screaming coming from the house
This made her run faster than her small legs could take her
Before she knew it she was in the bustling streets
Rushing past the busy morning workers on their daily routine
Not even noticing a broken little girl hobbling past them
Suddenly she crashed onto a young woman with a baby
Dropped on her knees and broke down into long awaited tears
Letting out all the ache,terror,fatigue and delight of freedom out
The woman, not knowing what to do, put her baby in the stroller,wrapped her in a tight embrace and cradled her small body
She wept for what seemed line an eternity until only small shivers of aftershock ran through her body
Knowing that in this woman’s arms she had found refuge
As she rested her head on the woman’s soft bosoms she knew that she had found a home
And from that day on the two of them set out to destroy the men who tortured her
The woman vowed that she would go to the ends of the world if that’s what it took, to make them pay for breaking her precious little girl’s soul
greaaaaaaaaaaaaat, happy ending
everyone loves a happy ending.. 😀
Excellent conclusion! I wish it happened in real life that way 😦 Great series that you wrote here. Loved it 🙂 hugs
Thanx Teresa, yes wouldnt everything just be perfect if it was as easy as this in real life..:-)..always fantastic to see you visit.. :-D..**hugs** right back at you.. 🙂
Great finish to your trilogy. Your writing and pacing is spot on. Who took the pic for your story??? It fits the mood perfectly!!!!
Thank you..I got the pic online and edited it a little bit. I also thought it fits the mood of my poems perfectly..:-)
i am really enjoying reading your work 🙂 thank you for sharing it!
It was my pleasure, and thank you for coming by.. im glad you enjoyed my work.. 🙂 🙂
Great ending … well knitted story!!
Thank you so much.. 🙂
Sad story, but with happy end. Rally well written.
Thank you for stoppig by on my page. I’ll keep visiting yours 🙂
You are welcome.i enjoyed reading your posts.:-) and thanx for stopping by as well.. 🙂
you write very well, my dear. my heart ached going through the different parts … and i liked the happy ending. …. insert redemption song, of freedom. 🙂 Thanks for sharing!
wooww.. thank you so much, im glad you enjoyed it.. 🙂 i will think about a redemption song for next time.. great advice.. 😀
Nice resolution!
Thank you.. 😀
Whew. A subject so scary to think about….you captured it vividly. QUite frankly, i was glad to have come to your blog after all the sections were done because you already had me on edge at the end of the first one! God. The heroin needle. It makes me sick that there are people so terrifying that they do this stuff. I wanted to be the mom with the baby to rescue the girl….
hahaha.. yeah, i know how it must have felt, i’m glad you came by to see the ending, i’m sure we all want to be the mom with the baby to rescue all the little girls who go through anything as painful as this..thank you for coming by.. 🙂
You should do more of these. It suits you!
Thank you, i do write a lot of short stories, but i never really publish them.. 🙂
I read all four parts just now. I’m glad the girl found refuge at the end. Love your style!
Thank you.. im glad you read through all of them.. 😀
Beloved dear heart, the body shop in canada would love to have this for their campaign against this sort of thing. I know a person who was in the sex trade at 3 She did not get rescued until the age of 33 but now rescues others…..dynamic writing dear heart….thanks for sharing this.
Thank you so much, this is a topic which is really very close to my heart, i just cant bear knowing that kids are abused..thank you so much for taking the time to read it.. 🙂
OMG!!!!!!! chapeauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, wooooooooooooooooooow was that a short story or a poem or what!!!!!!!!!!!!!
am sooooooooo loving this serieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees
Im glad you are enjoying it!! 😀 its a short poem series.. 🙂
sooooo unique 🙂