I saw you on a hot summer day
Your eyes were glistening with desire and longing
As handsome as a knight riding his horse ever waving an eager sword
Strikingly tall and proud
Your sun kissed skin shinning as the water droplets drip from your wet body
The moment you touched my hand i knew you were going to be trouble
Your sweet embrace took my breath away
As you turned around and said ” you intoxicate me”
I felt a shiver travel down my spine
As you moved your lips from mine to the nape of my neck
And your hands in a soft caress to the small of my back
My eyes shut tight as I felt a shudder with in me
You knocked my headlights out..
And then I heard you call my name..over and over and over you called me
Until my eyes flew open and you disappeared into foggy nothingness
I can still feel your rose like lips on mine as i move my finger over them
Your soft fingertips touching my bare skin
How could it have been a dream….
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Oh but those are the good dreams aren’t they? Although disappointing to awake from, lol. I got my knight in reality, but you already knew that didn’t you 🙂 Good post! I really liked it. Hugs, Teresa
Thanks Teresa, and yup i already know that you have your knight.. and im very happy for you.. a dream like this is the worst to wake up from because it feels so great.. 😀
How’d you make your blog so awesome?!?! O.O :))
Loooooll.. **blushing**.. im flattered.. thank you.. 😀
Haha! 🙂 It’s worth the effort to say so. :3
Very nice work. I really enjoyed it. Of course when I have the dream I am the knight (LOL). Still a good dream, and good poem.
Lol.. im guessing you are a guy huh.. thats good though that you see yourself as the knight.. :-D.. im glad you enjoyed it.. and thanx for visiting… 😀
oooooooo! I really liked this! It’s more than a poem, it makes you feel
thank you very much.. thats what i was hoping for.. 😀
Nice to see a blog site dedicated to poetry, and nice poetry at that. Keep up the good work.
I appreciate your kind and supportive words.. thank you for visiting..
Your words a very tangible. When reading this, it seems like I can feel and taste your descriptions! Really enjoyed this poem!
Thank you so much.. im glad you liked it..:-)
Very nice….and the ending. I didn’t guess that!
lol.. i didnt see it coming either,just kidding.. thanx for coming by.. 🙂
Your blog caught my eye. Thanks for sharing this information.
thank you for dropping by.. 🙂
Thank you for taking a look at my work, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed this. Dream poems are some of my favorites. Keep up the good work.
im glad you enjoyed this.. i also like dream poems because its a world you make up for yourself, it can either turn out wonderful or frightening..i hope to see you back here soon.. 🙂
Very good.
I am undecided if the jolt that “You knocked my headlights out.. ” is just the perfect contrast or not right in this context. Is it just the right device to make clear to the reader this doesn’t take place in the time of knights and is in modern times? Or does it break the mood? I just can’t quite decide.
What made you choose such a strong industrial image in such a pastoral poem?
I thought the huge difference made the contrast i wanted.. 🙂
Then that’s the answer! It is very effective.
Thank you, im glad it is.. 😀
oh yes, the power of a word, can capture the bravest men and the stone cold women 🙂 they r magical 🙂
My eyes shut tight as I felt a shudder with in me
You knocked my headlights out..
like if u had a car accident 😀 heheh kidding, god forbid 🙂
lol, exactly like that.. 😀
i see u have a thing for knights in shiny armors and sweaty guys 😀 cant deny that some girls fall for the scent of a man 😀 “hell yeah” 😀 like we fall for a scent of a woman 😀 “Al Pacino” style 😀
but her scent would be those intoxicating perfumes she wears 🙂
very true..lol, and all women love a man who can come and safe them from all things and knights are the dreams of all women, and sweaty ragged men ( but not ones who smell bad lol) are the fantasies of all women!! 😀
of course not 😀