My dark knight…
Dark knight you believe you are
Soul less you keep telling me
Unlovable you proclaim to me once again
Shadows cast behind your gray guarded eyes
Unreadable as you move towards me
You kiss me with fevered passion
Desperately seeking for my love
As if your life depended on it
As if it is the last kiss you will ever taste
As if mine are the only lips you will ever brush against
Taking me in, holding me so tight it deliciously hurts
Breathing me in as if this is the last breath you will ever take
I sense the panic in your embrace
Fear of losing me is driving you to the brink of never letting me go
To you my dark knight i tell you
You are nothing if not the most beloved man on earth
I am now and forever yours to never lose..


nicely written
Thank you Ian..
always a pleasure seeing you here
Really nice.
why thank you Bluebutterflies..
Somehow like an open letter to “The One”.
i believe you are right Ben, i didnt realize that until you said it..
I hope you realise that adds to your poem rather than diminishing it. (Just in case you were taking my comment as a criticism.)
ooh not at all.. i know it adds to it..
Romantic…
Thank you Bikram
Oh Abbi…..I LOVE this! As a big fan of romance and passion, and the dark hunger that sometimes accompanies it…..you wrote from the depths of your heart and from a vision that is rare…..truly we are kindred spirits and understand that place we express from, words that are kissed with eternal love……so very amazing, a wonderful job on this poem…..I am bookmarking it to come back to it again later……
Thank you
love and light
Celeste
OOh my thank you so much Celeste, im glad you enjoyed it that much!!
So romantic!
thank you so much!!
I nominated you for a well deserved award please visit my post to pick it up .
myownheart.me
wooww!! i am very grateful for your nomination, thank you..
i will be sure to check it out..
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To the man I love.
This is wonderfully romantic… Warm and inviting too. TY! for stopping by.
aaawww.. thank YOU for stopping by..
Abi, this is beautiful!
ooh my, thank you so very much
Beautiful…
Thank you!!
abichica, this is wonderful. This title with these opening lines makes the love poem extraordinary.
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Maria
aaww.. thank you so much Maria..
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utterly butterly beautiful. takes my breath away to read of such romance
wooww!! thank you so much Amira!!
….hope you are OK, this is enveloping !
It is enveloping, but i am doing good.
cool